Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Who Will Love Me

Who will love me when I’m a restless relentless rust?
Who will see me when I’m a distant decaying dust?
Who will take my heart and lay it on pillows layered gold?
Who will light the shadowed skies when clouds are greying old?
Who will lift my saddened smile when I crumble to the ground?
Who will take my selfless soul when the triumphant trumpets sound?
Who will caress my humble hands when my tears flow to the salty sea?
Who will steer my sailing spirit when the Angels come to carry me?

The Lord will as He promised all of these things and so much more
When we open up our hearts and let Him in as He knocks at our door.


This poem is dedicated to my friend Victor Buhagiar...simply because he believes 

Aug.11.2016...^WW^
Not for any contest...

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Cona Adams February 4, 2017 at 9:12 AM An easy seven for me, Winged Warrior. A great write.

Gail Lewis September 6, 2016 at 7:20 PM This is such a lovely poem well done - new member - stop by sometime - :)

Holly Bohto August 21, 2016 at 10:27 AM Your faith has many admirers WW I enjoy yor writing style........Because it: Reveals the seat of motivation inside your heart. Winged Warrior August 21, 2016 at 10:49 AM Thank you so much Holly...not much I can do lol...im guided by angels...and when I go off track...they let me know in more ways than one lol...gid bless...WW

Just James August 16, 2016 at 12:51 AM worthy dedication! well done Winged Warrior August 16, 2016 at 4:24 PM Thank you James...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2016 at 10:44 AM Victor is an angel. I am glad you dedicated one like this to him. Winged Warrior August 14, 2016 at 5:08 PM Thank you Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Alexis Y. August 14, 2016 at 8:49 AM Hi WW, I really enjoyed reading this inspirational piece that you dedicated to Victor. I'm sure he will appreciate it very much. A Big seven:-) Alexis Winged Warrior August 14, 2016 at 8:55 AM Thank you so much Alexis...god bless...^WW^

Wendy Rycroft August 13, 2016 at 4:50 PM Love your poem it's fantastic xxx Winged Warrior August 14, 2016 at 8:54 AM Thank you Wendy...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison August 12, 2016 at 3:00 PM Very uplifting and a lovely tribute ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx Winged Warrior August 13, 2016 at 11:07 AM Thank you Jan...god bless...^WW^

Laura Leiser August 11, 2016 at 10:13 PM Perfectly wonderful:) Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 7:48 AM Thank you my dear Laura...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner August 11, 2016 at 1:36 PM Great tribute to a great friend of all, Wing Man. Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 7:47 AM Thank you Daniel my friend...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2016 at 11:46 AM WW, i find this uplifting!... He lights our path!..huggs Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 7:45 AM Thank you nette...god bless...^WW^

DM Babbit August 11, 2016 at 9:26 AM Surely this is the question each of asks. Nicely written and answered. Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 7:45 AM Thank you my friend DM...god bless...^WW^

Tim Smith August 11, 2016 at 9:03 AM Nice to see a different side of you. Great tribute to Victor. Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 7:44 AM Thank you Tim...god bless...^WW^

Cheryl Hoffman August 11, 2016 at 8:42 AM Very nice inspirational poem WW!:) Winged Warrior August 12, 2016 at 7:43 AM Thank you Cheryl...god bless...^WW^