Who Will Love Me

Who will love me when I’m a restless relentless rust?
Who will see me when I’m a distant decaying dust?
Who will take my heart and lay it on pillows layered gold?
Who will light the shadowed skies when clouds are greying old?
Who will lift my saddened smile when I crumble to the ground?
Who will take my selfless soul when the triumphant trumpets sound?
Who will caress my humble hands when my tears flow to the salty sea?
Who will steer my sailing spirit when the Angels come to carry me?

The Lord will as He promised all of these things and so much more
When we open up our hearts and let Him in as He knocks at our door.


This poem is dedicated to my friend Victor Buhagiar...simply because he believes 

Aug.11.2016...^WW^
Not for any contest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/4/2017 9:12:00 AM
An easy seven for me, Winged Warrior. A great write.
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Date: 9/6/2016 7:20:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem well done - new member - stop by sometime - :)
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Date: 8/21/2016 10:27:00 AM
Your faith has many admirers WW I enjoy yor writing style........Because it: Reveals the seat of motivation inside your heart.
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Date: 8/21/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Holly...not much I can do lol...im guided by angels...and when I go off track...they let me know in more ways than one lol...gid bless...WW
Date: 8/16/2016 12:51:00 AM
worthy dedication! well done
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:24:00 PM
Thank you James...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/14/2016 10:44:00 AM
Victor is an angel. I am glad you dedicated one like this to him.
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Date: 8/14/2016 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/14/2016 8:49:00 AM
Hi WW, I really enjoyed reading this inspirational piece that you dedicated to Victor. I'm sure he will appreciate it very much. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/14/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/13/2016 4:50:00 PM
Love your poem it's fantastic xxx
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Date: 8/14/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Wendy...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/12/2016 3:00:00 PM
Very uplifting and a lovely tribute ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Jan...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/11/2016 10:13:00 PM
Perfectly wonderful:)
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you my dear Laura...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/11/2016 1:36:00 PM
Great tribute to a great friend of all, Wing Man.
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Daniel my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/11/2016 11:46:00 AM
WW, i find this uplifting!... He lights our path!..huggs
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you nette...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/11/2016 9:26:00 AM
Surely this is the question each of asks. Nicely written and answered.
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you my friend DM...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/11/2016 9:03:00 AM
Nice to see a different side of you. Great tribute to Victor.
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Tim...god bless...^WW^
Date: 8/11/2016 8:42:00 AM
Very nice inspirational poem WW!:)
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Date: 8/12/2016 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl...god bless...^WW^
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