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Who Will Be Then Criminal

what is seen what is felt
inner environment evolves in mind
then do to go ahead on with external

carries if beneficial 
otherwise stops steps there from
self judgement of selfishness talks

sensation sparks in organs
stubborn instructions compel 
to be lived with that

feedback of negative actions 
if realized in advance with positively trained mind
who will be then criminal?

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Michelle Mac Donald

August 22, 2016 at 6:44 PM

This is a head buzz, BL; with the brain held by a pendulum state. Could a lion be called a criminal when she tries to protect her cubs from a pack of hyenas? When they laugh hysterically, will she stand by stupidly, or should she roar to chase them off? Believe me, no one is more fed up than myself.:( Best wishes, Mikki

Michelle Mac Donald

August 23, 2016 at 6:39 PM

Sound advice, thank you for your thoughts of wisdom.:)

Bl Devnath

August 23, 2016 at 10:42 AM

Harmful activity will come to an end if all the people are trained with positive and constructive education and realize the feedback in advance before doing any harmful act. Bad instincts evolve from seeing the negative activity in family and society as the organs are like blotting paper adsorbs the mind where mind gradually becomes stubborn and self being becomes unable to control himself. That can be stopped through training of doing welfare with love. Thanks for your comment my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 21, 2016 at 11:39 AM

- Great written dear Bl, with an important question in the end - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

August 21, 2016 at 12:55 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your appreciation. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

August 20, 2016 at 3:21 PM

Philosophical thoughts with each word carefully chosen for the most impact. I love your "thinking pieces" written with such heart, your words linger long after..a true sign of exceptional talent.:-) A profound read, most enjoyable, with return readings assured..A 7+ :-) blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath

August 21, 2016 at 8:36 AM

Thanks for your high appreciation and 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl