Who We Are

Who we are begins at birth,
Our DNA a start,
But every soul upon the earth
From others stands apart.

Our personalities are there
From when we take a breath,
Remaining with us everywhere
'Til we succumb to death.

The quiet, shy, rambunctious, rude,
The introvert, the prankster,
The one who has an attitude,
The serious, the gangster...

Show early glimpses to the world
Of who they are inside
And as the years become unfurled,
Such truths they cannot hide.

Though nurture has its own effect,
Experience as well,
Not coddling or, worse, neglect,
Can break that magic spell.

Genetics and the dash of luck,
Or lack of it, we've got
Create the traits with which we're stuck,
Both liking them or not.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/24/2016 7:58:00 PM
A very insightful write ilene. I was glad when you got to the luck or lack of it part. That I believe is a very real part of it.
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Date: 5/20/2016 4:07:00 PM
- I believe that it is we ourselves who decide how our life should be .... most people always use their heart and soul - but also those who lack feelings and understanding - Perpetrator of the July 2011 attacks in Norway that killed 77 people are a man without heart or soul - Very well written, Ilene - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/20/2016 3:59:00 PM
Nature and nurture... the blueprints of our beings both good and otherwise! A superb poem showing our true selves. Well done Ilene!! Best wishes, Keith
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