Who Saved Me?

Thinking nothing much at all my daughter's house my only aim rhythmic wipers sweep across clear away the blurry rain crazy traffic in all three lanes hypnotic lights dazzle bright concentration on full power hate driving on a rainy night that tune appears, that melody tears start to flow, it's nothing new depression held inside so tight till something triggers thoughts of you turn up the music, sobbing hard my will power at it's lowest ebb a constant battle since you passed can hardly see the road ahead thoughts in my head of what's the point to struggle on without you here the steering wheel I let fall free I feel so calm, I feel no fear a sudden noise I recognize my mobile phone sings out its tone I shudder with shock and look at it I see the name, say's Candy-Home brought back out of threatening thoughts my daughter's name was all it took were you with me on that night I can't believe it was just luck

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Date: 3/9/2011 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Carolyne. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:53:00 PM
Great write, Carolyne. I have also sometimes been tempted to drop into despair. It seems like the angels around me understand and bring me some kind of "wake up call", like you experienced. Congratulations on being featured this week. Really glad to be introduced to your work.
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Date: 12/7/2010 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyne on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:27:00 AM
Carolyne, I am so sorry for your loss and the pain you are still experiencing. I pray you find peace in knowing the one you loved is always with you... just look at your daughter! Congrats on your poem being featured!!! Lay
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