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Never knew I'd find you, Didn't think I'd be ready. I held on to the optimism baby, I held steady. Traveled some bumpy roads but asked God to direct my path, kept the faith not knowing how strong I was til being strong was the only option I had. Kept myself ready, buried treasures only you had the key to and who knew? in the untraditional way I'd find you. Unavailable physically but mentally close enough to awaken all five senses. Smelling the aroma of Love, finally able to get a taste of pure intellectual master mind, so hard to find because some are blind to physical appearance or superficial ignorance. I felt your common sense embrace my spirit and wrapped me up like a cocoon, soon I transforming to beautiful black butterfly. You've touch apart of my mind that others have failed to imprint upon. Tried but didn't understand the quality of woman I truly am until I was gone. Strong... enough to stand on my own, to discern the difference between drainage and receiving nutrients. Your touch sent... non other then unadulterated truths! Resuscitated New life, I took a deep breath for you. Now rejuvenated felt as if resurrected and elevated to new plains, new hopes, new dreams. Past appreciated because the struggled crossed me over to you mind renewed and it's gift is you in modern day. Placed sights on the future see... this perception to me is a blessing and I hear God saying just keep me in the midst. Don't forget who ordained this! I most heed father's instruction to have supreme bliss also know as true love... who knew?

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Date: 5/24/2012 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:35:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today. I will try to come back later this week to read more Danielle. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Danielle Lewis
Date: 5/8/2012 8:31:00 PM
I hope you feel better Ms. Carol! Thank you for taking the time compliment my work. I appreciate you.
Date: 5/7/2012 4:18:00 PM
This doesn't sound like you're new to writing..check your soup mail.!! Sounds as if you perform on stage..nice work.
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Danielle Lewis
Date: 5/7/2012 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2012 1:46:00 PM
Danielle well said..David
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Danielle Lewis
Date: 5/7/2012 7:25:00 PM
Thank you very much Mr. David.

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