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Who Loves You, Baby

who loves you if i don't tell me, who's going to fix this if we won't don't nobody miss you like me and i know don't nobody kiss you like me not with lips and tongue but heart and soul with sweat and tears been in my blood for years untold incurable and uncontrolled this thing of ours the passion worth enduring the painful hours this puppy love got dog balls cat claws and church halls echoing wedding bells pulsing through each blood cell trust me, baby i know the difference between heaven and hell

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Date: 4/16/2009 10:54:00 PM
Love this, very well penned, love how you just put it all on the table so freely, thanks so much for sharing!
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:17:00 PM
kissing with heart and soul-your expressions make poetry flow,bravo
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:49:00 PM
awesome
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Date: 4/14/2009 10:14:00 AM
very nice good write
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