Who Loves You, Baby

who loves you
if i don't
tell me, who's going to fix this
if we won't
don't nobody miss you
like me
and i know don't nobody kiss you 
like me
not with lips and tongue
but heart and soul
with sweat and tears
been in my blood for years untold
incurable and uncontrolled
this thing of ours
the passion worth enduring
the painful hours
this puppy love
got dog balls
cat claws and
church halls
echoing wedding bells
pulsing through each blood cell
trust me, baby
i know the difference between heaven and hell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 10:54 PM
Love this, very well penned, love how you just put it all on the table so freely, thanks so much for sharing!
Chircop Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 3:17 PM
kissing with heart and soul-your expressions make poetry flow,bravo
Kroeger Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 12:49 PM
awesome
Loveless Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 10:14 AM
very nice good write
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