Who Knew

People come people go what fun it is when they don't show mind equal blown! They say we're friends until the end ride or die whats that in my eye a tear from you! Who knew? My so called friend is this the end of us? Yes its a must, because I've lost the trust I had with you. I feel like a used up old shoe.. Who knew ? Best friends forever or just for today I feel so played and betrayed! My feelings of trust I'd say it's a must to bust this up, no need to mend it lets just end it. Who Knew? ©Cheri Larsson

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 8:45:00 PM

Good poem, Cheri. There are lots of fair weather friends in this world, disappointments part of our learning curve.

Phyl Losophy

Date: 4/9/2018 9:45:00 AM

It hurts deeply to allow someone into your circle so close, only to find out later they were just faking...but, eventually a person's true colors will surface. And ultimately in the long run it's more of lost to them, because they will never find another friend so true as you....

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 3/29/2018 12:22:00 PM

This is a really nice written poem and an enjoyable one to read, you see everybody should learn to live alone because nobody is going to stay with you forever, all such promises are broken, which were once friends are now strangers and in the end we have to go to our grave all alone, so nobody will stay forever except a handful of persons who are sincair, so what s best, never let that people leave you and don t choose someone else over them who knows that that new person will stay or not,

Cheri Larsson
Date: 3/29/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you!! I agree with you 100 percent =)