Who Is Your Neighbor

WHO IS YOUR NEIGHBOR Forty feet high and circumference of six feet, my neighbor is a massive Saguaro cactus It can be a source of sorrow or safety to wild creatures running in blackness Probably hundred years old and stands all day in the hot sun unable to run Sometimes a neighborhood gang of lowlifes will drive by and use it for target fun It has two arms and stands close enough to its partner that they are hugging My neighbor is surrounded by many cousins who are jealous of its majestic flowers budding It starts out as little seedling protected by a nurse tree and now by governments My neighbor is so popular around here that his cousins are used for yard ornaments Unfortunately this neighbor is sick from all the exhaust fumes coming from the passing cars I am happy to claim this green giant as my closest, quietest neighbor so far
SassyLady 09/12/15
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Reams Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:20 PM
I love this write Sassy! Congrats on your win.
Merryman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 9:53 PM
A unique take on the contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, KIm
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September 14, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Miss, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT
Sassy Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) jadazzle Jan xx
Sassy Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Thank you again!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 12:39 PM
They are quite beautiful. I take it you are from Arizona.
Sassy Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Yes. Live on the edge of the Saguaro National Park. Four acres of cacti that are very inspirational.
Lindley Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 8:58 AM
My friend, you have a giant neighbor! A shame that it is used for target practice and is sick now. Truly enjoyed this fine poem this great morn. Good luck in that contest,should do quite well methinks. A7
Sassy Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Thank you!
United Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:22 AM
What a wonderful take on the theme sassy I love the personification:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Sassy Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Thank you JaDazzle ... it was fun to write.
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