Who Is Your Issue With

You think weakness admits its flaws 
that’s why you don’t correct yours 
attempting progress stuck on pause 
back towards the done befores 

Destined by the lack of vision 
superstition on a mission 
when the intellect is missing 
say your prayers keep on wishing 

But you don’t hit your enemy 
never where they’re meant to be 
frustrated repeatedly 
mirror mirror can you see?
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August 1, 2025 at 3:57 AM
You know nick I was on a rappers app….lol taught me a lot but I still can’t rap! Go figure. Met several people from England too! None are as fiesty as you tho!;) keep being you nick don’t change for anyone!
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