Who Is This?

I awake from the same dream, that one when I heard you scream ,you sounded so close but 
surely not, In that dream there was fire, my hands are still hot, In this dream your running, 
running from me, but the ashes are heavy, so thick I cannot see,Let me help you little girl 
please come see, but when the girl turned around the girl was me........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 27, 2009 at 2:17 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Frieda. Love, Carol
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July 25, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Very interesting Lyric. Very descriptive of dream time that is revealing us to ourselves. Keep writing. Sara
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