Who Is He - When No One Sees

Who he is when no one sees
he is when no one sees
when no one sees
Who one sees
one sees
who
He
is


Is he who you see ~ when no one sees?

Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 1:04 PM
reflective and spellbinding, lay... well done! :) huggs, nette
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 12:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Lay. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 12:17 AM
This was very interestingly done, Lay! I enjoyed it.
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