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Who I Want To Be

Who am I? I am a girl, I am strong, I am compassionate. I am, me. Even then, I am not enough. I am not accepted, I am not skinny I am not wealthy. I am, unworthy. People don't know, for which they do not care. I want to be loved, I want to be cared about. I want a good life, I want, peace. Yet to this day I can never be, just beautiful me.

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Lionel Ledbetter

Date: 12/14/2011 11:31:00 PM

I think you are beautiful, and a very sincere person.

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/8/2011 6:08:00 PM

A great poem. I always chose to be unique. I didn't care what others thought. I love me no matter what others thought and in the end found what I was looking for. My peace was within me all along. Your poem is very sad. Faith in who you are is better.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/7/2011 6:10:00 AM

Sad poem Amber ,I see a person with great feeling and heart. Anne