Who Do You Think I Am

birth, devotion, how i feel, little sister, mirror, mother, together,

Who do you think I am - Poetry Contest

Birthed special as twins
From a shared womb
We were made to feel special!

My twin was first to let go
 She broke our love knot
 Hurrying to her new freedom!

She waited for me crying
Until I was laid alongside her
In an identical pink warming blanket!

It was my turn to be crying now
Her abandoned cry made silent
Knowing I was with her there!

Inseparables we grew to become as before
Our new home was very 'safe' for two
Twins were to be an indulged oddity then!

So alike and special side by side
We were coveted and blessed
These babies who came from one womb!

We were cherished and adored
Always up in arms side by side
And fed  together with spoonfuls of love!

Our sibling sister did follow soon
But shared her blankets alone
She was ‘loved’ for being only one!

We thought her an intruder
She was the star, sun and moon
And selfishly pocket our time-shares!

We needn’t have walked as early as her
We were up 'in arms' for show and tell
And only spoke in our secret tongues!


We were still twins but so spoiled 
She walked and talked much earlier
And she was quick to spark on her own!


She learnt survival tools to get on with life 
Our security was faulted built out of smoke
Dissipating at its  now 'mired' core! 

We were on our own and naked
Our identity apart was thin
Time came to us late in hard knocks!

A twin is  only birthed as one 
Apart and special on its own
Each born to make its own identity!

Twins will be together after death
When their love knot again is twined
And two twinned hands clasp once more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/1/2016 8:01:00 AM
Great poetic expressions enveloping mind blowing lines. You've maintained your standard of impressing sound minds and I am definitely one of those you've wowed. Great work friend
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 2/1/2016 6:46:00 PM
Haven't done too much for poetry soup. You gave me such a lift and, as I have said in the past critiquing your works--- you are an impressive poet and wowed me with your writings. Thanks always, ....didee
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 2/1/2016 6:41:00 PM
Once again you have, as in the past, made me very happy with your critique. How did you know I needed a bit of poetic reassurance? I was today just doubting this manuscript almost ready to go off to the publishers. I have taken a year putting everything together that I have painted and put to prose about nature. continued below.
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