Daljit Khankhana Poet Rhyme

Who Can Won the War?

>Understanding, Up and down has a different level
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
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>Life is the combination of a different level
>Color, caste, race, religion, is a target feeble
>Is it natural discrimination or a variety of nature?
>Time has taken centuries for its identity a grapple ?
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>Twenty centuries skill and experience is human growth pedal.
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal
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>A fight for power or a grace: the honor of bravery,
>Different matters have misunderstanding a level of slavery,
>Non co-operation or misjudged by the expectations
>What do you think: who can learn all about having a clevery?
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>What is truth if God is one: religion has race and caste bundle?
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
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>How long time nature took to purify the water and fresh air?
>To grow healthy food: to differentiate the poison less affair,
>Time has taken a long to develop gravity for a planet?
>Why has only Earth a source of existence an oxygen care?
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>Is natural process for welfare also not feasible?
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal
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>A process is for understanding, and sense of co-operation
>Experience and non-cooperation seems beneficiary dedication,
>Nature is powerful can ruin within few seconds if a man can do,
>but Honey Bees never mixed poison in their sweet production,
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>Who can protect life and civilization if a person fails to handle?
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
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>Nobody can won the war: not a meaning of Liberty,
>Ancestor has tried all but struggle is a root of fraternity,
>Efforts for peace is a struggle by a dedicated person,
>We need rest after all a long struggle is natural eternity,
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>Only peace can provide, a sense of Love; affection of cuddle.
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
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>Who can won the War: why does a person dream a War?
>How long a personal existence is? Only present is our,
>We need to learn more how to live on Earth?
>Future is uncertain: A dream of heaven is only a future,
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>All Depends upon circumstances only nature can won a saddle.
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.

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Joseph Spence Sr June 26, 2010 at 2:33 PM I like the use of rhetorical questions n this poem. They bring the war home to reality. The repeating lines certainly drive the point home. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

Adeleke Adeite June 23, 2010 at 11:24 AM This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~

Iolanda Scripca June 21, 2010 at 5:42 PM Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Marycile Beer June 21, 2010 at 3:25 PM Daljits, you have covered a lot of factors in your poem. Very nice keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile

Carol Sunshine Brown June 21, 2010 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Daljit. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi June 21, 2010 at 5:33 AM Great sentiment in this POWERFUL verse...perhaps you would add to the SOUP"s knowledge by giving us a verse in the Broad Horizon's contest...please contact me..in my blog or in soup mail and pick a topic OR suggest one not listed! Light & Love