Who Can Won the War?

>Understanding, Up and down has a different level
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
>
>Life is the combination of a different level
>Color, caste, race, religion, is a target feeble
>Is it natural discrimination or a variety of nature?
>Time has taken centuries for its identity a grapple ?
>
>Twenty centuries skill and experience is human growth pedal.
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal
>
>A fight for power or a grace: the honor of bravery,
>Different matters have misunderstanding a level of slavery,
>Non co-operation or misjudged by the expectations
>What do you think: who can learn all about having a clevery?
>
>What is truth if God is one: religion has race and caste bundle?
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
>
>How long time nature took to purify the water and fresh air?
>To grow healthy food: to differentiate the poison less affair,
>Time has taken a long to develop gravity for a planet?
>Why has only Earth a source of existence an oxygen care?
>
>Is natural process for welfare also not feasible?
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal
>
>A process is for understanding, and sense of co-operation
>Experience and non-cooperation seems beneficiary dedication,
>Nature is powerful can ruin within few seconds if a man can do,
>but Honey Bees never mixed poison in their sweet production,
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>Who can protect life and civilization if a person fails to handle?
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
>
>Nobody can won the war: not a meaning of Liberty,
>Ancestor has tried all but struggle is a root of fraternity,
>Efforts for peace is a struggle by a dedicated person,
>We need rest after all a long struggle is natural eternity,
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>Only peace can provide, a sense of Love; affection of cuddle.
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.
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>Who can won the War: why does a person dream a War?
>How long a personal existence is? Only present is our,
>We need to learn more how to live on Earth?
>Future is uncertain: A dream of heaven is only a future,
>
>All Depends upon circumstances only nature can won a saddle.
>We need knowledge and experience to find a medal.

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Date: 6/26/2010 2:33:00 PM
I like the use of rhetorical questions n this poem. They bring the war home to reality. The repeating lines certainly drive the point home. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:24:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:42:00 PM
Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:25:00 PM
Daljits, you have covered a lot of factors in your poem. Very nice keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Daljit. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:33:00 AM
Great sentiment in this POWERFUL verse...perhaps you would add to the SOUP"s knowledge by giving us a verse in the Broad Horizon's contest...please contact me..in my blog or in soup mail and pick a topic OR suggest one not listed! Light & Love
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