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Who Calls Me In This Darkness

WHO CALLS ME IN THIS DARKNESS? Who calls me in this darkness? The voice is cold but not fierce, Distant yet distinct to my ears Gripping my senses from so many years Who calls me in this darkness? Guessed rightly the voice was maiden Full of love stately laden Methinks is it from doors of heaven Who calls me in this darkness? Such words to brighten the heart Guiding spirit to enrich the heart Piercing the soul by its golden dart Who calls me in this darkness? Made my pen to write this history Dwindling my psyche with thy mastery Remained always a question, a mystery Who calls me in this darkness? Following this enigma I entered a place Walking on the clouds I found it I space Then I realized the caller is not of my race Who calls me in this darkness? The voice comes from breeze of no direction With the tales of human perfection Strolling the world in nature’s protection Who calls me in this darkness? *****

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/17/2022 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.

Bhimagouda Patil
Date: 7/17/2022 9:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for accepting me as a member of the writing community. I hope this journey has just begun and would surely go a long way. Thank you again.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 7/15/2022 7:48:00 AM

I really enjoyed this, with the repeating "who calls me..." line and some nice rhyme pairs. So I want to know! Who calls you? :-) Have a blessed day!

Bhimagouda Patil
Date: 7/15/2022 8:03:00 AM

Thank you so much for appreciating my humble submission. The "call" is from my source of inspiration..