Who Are You When No One's Watching

In those days of wearing face masks,
it makes one think what are we hiding?
even behind these plastic masks, we've a cover
not one we like to admit but it's a real thing

Honestly, our special mask is always on
make sure it shows the best image of me
this mask has different colours and sizes
we control it to show what's to see

Of freedom, we speak of falsely
for wearing any mask were not free
real freedom is to be true to self
hide from no one showing the real me

This is no easy thing to be
remain true despite the odds you face
many will hate you but be singly loyal
stand strong to show you have grace

At the end of the day no less
remember God sees your soul not the face
leave off that mask be true to self
hide no more be free to win your race

So let's ask the question before us
who are you when no one's watching?
learn to be content with ourselves
fly free as a bird no need to catch that bus

 (I've written this after being moved and inspired by an article titled ' Who are you when no one's watching' by poet, writer and friend Joanna Stratford)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/21/2020 10:37:00 PM
Nicely penned! Surely we stand naked before God, who examines our innermost thoughts as well as our hidden deeds. Blessings, Gershon
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/22/2020 2:49:00 AM
Hi Gershon, Glad you liked it and agreed with my sentiments, Blessings, Gordon
Date: 6/15/2020 3:50:00 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Gordon McConnell.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/15/2020 4:06:00 PM
Hi Funom, glad you was so impressed by this one and you loved it too. Hope all is well with you, Blessings,Gordon
Date: 6/13/2020 1:05:00 PM
Hello Gordon McConnell, I like this message in your poem. We all have a journey to follow,each one going a different direction or the same route. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2020 10:12:00 AM
Hello Gordon , i have enjoyed this poem. Yes I am having a nice weekend thank you. I hope you afe to. Enjoy your day my fiiend.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/13/2020 2:51:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Glad you liked it and trust you're enjoying the weekend. Blessings always, Gordon
Date: 6/13/2020 10:17:00 AM
A very beautiful message from your pen Gordon. The most important thing in our lives should be to follow a path that remains unwavered even when we are alone. Last year, an artist Mandy Moore had made a comeback after 10 years with a song called 'Who we are when nobody's looking'. It beautifully covers the journey of life. I got reminded of that one with your words :) God bless you.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/13/2020 10:35:00 AM
Hi Aditi, Glad you were impressed and trust all is well. Blessings, Gordon
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