Who Are You?

~Why do you bring me such sorrow?~
Sometimes you are amazingly wonderful
Other times you are downright despicable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 8:15 PM
so true, sometimes we love that person so much, and other times we ask ourselves why, are we with that person, I guess the good outweighs the bad.
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March 24, 2009 at 1:31 PM
So much truth in just three lines. It's amazing how vacillating people can be. The title is fitting. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Have a nice day! Karen
Mc Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 1:44 PM
great senryu!! and thanj you!!
Endro Yuwono Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 12:58 AM
yup..as sharon said, sounds like a man to me.is that true?hmm...hope you have beautiful days always, tyesha. and thx for your comment to my write.tavip
Atanacio Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Are you talking about Laurie too? only kidding a gem written here
Winter Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Sounds like a man to me. Good luck. Great write. Love, Shar
Smalling Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 10:15 AM
This feels so personal, but we grow and change don't we. Poems are the only camera that see the point of change. Thanks for your tribute, God bless you
Anderson Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 3:55 AM
i like to think that i'm more sometimes than other times. lol.
Haniff Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 9:25 AM
this is soo true! I can relate....great form .....Maryam*
P. Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 8:03 AM
this question... relates to all kinds of relationships!! and there is never a response!! lively senryu... ~ Arany
Ginn Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 4:37 AM
If they could be mildly despicable Id say whoa you've got a keeper but when you go all the way to downright well there could be a problem with this one
Rhinem Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 2:39 AM
Smile? Well, this sounds like one of those classic love hate kind of feelings? It makes me think about what "Jesus Christ" said about human natures flucuating of hearts emotions when they wanted to make Him their king....Smile~the nature of the beast more or less dear "Talented, Precious & Priceless Tyesha!!!"~I sincerely hope You are doing well dear lady!? And, just another one of Your profoundly expressive and deepened writes!!!~" Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Yours, John!!!":):)
Tanaskow Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 2:20 AM
sound like a true believer.
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