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Bird falls from a nest,
and flies, another falls dies~~
uninvited guest. Date: 06/05/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Oooooh! The struggle for life, well-depicted. Nice haiku!! ~ gw
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:45 PM
Life goes on GW, Aloha William
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Great imagery...one flies...one dies!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 5:06 PM
That which perpetuates Kim, Aloha William
Michael Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:35 AM
Well done...It's certainly the way of life...some fly some die...All the best William
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Astutely said Arturo, Aloha William
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Powerful piece!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Nature unveiled...Maureen, Aloha William
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