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Bird falls from a nest,
and flies, another falls dies~~
uninvited guest. Date: 06/05/2019

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Date: 6/5/2019 6:09:00 PM
Oooooh! The struggle for life, well-depicted. Nice haiku!! ~ gw
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/5/2019 6:45:00 PM
Life goes on GW, Aloha William
Date: 6/5/2019 4:50:00 PM
Great imagery...one flies...one dies!
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/5/2019 5:06:00 PM
That which perpetuates Kim, Aloha William
Date: 6/5/2019 11:35:00 AM
Well done...It's certainly the way of life...some fly some die...All the best William
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/5/2019 12:50:00 PM
Astutely said Arturo, Aloha William
Date: 6/5/2019 10:58:00 AM
Powerful piece!
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/5/2019 11:07:00 AM
Nature unveiled...Maureen, Aloha William