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Who am I

Who am I? A fur blown away by the wind, A small nerve detached from a great mind, A small cheer suppressed by restless sighs, A little chirp disappeared between big neighs. Who am I? A silence disturbed by the chaos, A small nail in this big house, A whisper lost among the screams, A small desire beside big dreams. Who am I? An innocent knight in this blood shed, A little crimson in the dark red, A sand castle destroyed by the sea, A refugee about to flee. Who am I? An unnamed letter by a passenger, Being uselessly protected by these rangers, I would wait till I freeze................ And now I'm a life gone away with the breeze....... Now I understand what I was, A mere life born for no great cause.

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Date: 11/2/2021 1:58:00 PM
Great poem. Did you ever figure out the cause?
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Date: 11/19/2017 3:31:00 PM
Well done, Yushi. Methinks your cause may be larger than you might guess. ;-) Hello Antartica, nice reaching out to you!!
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Date: 11/20/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, again. As for the cause, I'm still figuring that out.
Date: 10/19/2017 6:57:00 PM
Your poem is very touching. I enjoyed reading it. And I'm very impressed to be reading such lovely poetry from so far away. I am from Canada. Best wishes, please continue to post poetry.
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Date: 10/20/2017 1:59:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement.