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An Eroded Heart When you see me the smile shall not vanish from my face But peep into my heart it is laden with tears of an eroded heart Burdened with the sorrows of the self and of others around me A soul that knows nothing but survives on the language of love Much love have I received when I held the hands of pain and suffering Much shattered have I been by the masks of ego that bestrode by my side Destiny's unkindness of distancing family ties since early childhood Were lessons for humanitarian reprieve in lives of others around me Oft insulted and abused but forgiving next morn with my famous sunny smile January 28, 2016

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Date: 4/14/2016 1:25:00 AM
Great one...
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/28/2016 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Divya!
Date: 2/13/2016 9:00:00 PM
thanks for the reply
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/15/2016 4:35:00 AM
Welcome!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:49:00 PM
Welcome!
Date: 2/9/2016 11:56:00 PM
Balveen, thank you for the super XOOL Who AM I Support. A delight and head scratching contest. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/13/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thanks! Atleast I am there!
Date: 2/9/2016 11:35:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats on the who I am taks! Thanks for supporting another PD contest. through SK
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/13/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 2/6/2016 12:56:00 AM
That's very touching. The personal pain is poignantly expressed. Very well written.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/13/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thanks so much for your appreciation!
Date: 2/2/2016 9:00:00 AM
Ever strong -in the smile Nice write :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/2/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Ingrid!
Date: 2/1/2016 9:30:00 PM
This poem gives a sunny message of hope. I like it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/2/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Mathew!

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