Who Am I

I am a creation of myself I don't know who I am I'm this to you and that to him Hardly more than just a scam I'd like to be who I'd like to be If only I could figure Which of me is the me I see within the mirror

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:39:00 PM

Howard Tunick, Congrats in Catie Lindsey's Who are you? contest. Love LINDA

Shaunda Lindsay

Date: 4/8/2016 12:37:00 PM

lol I like this. Let me guess...You're an enigma. A puzzle waiting to be put yourself together. Life is so much better when it isn't black and white. Very thought provoking.

Howard Tunick
Date: 4/10/2016 6:41:00 PM

I am an enigma... only to myself. Not waiting to put myself together anymore. Finally figured out I'll never get there but really don't find it a problem. Life is good and really pretty interesting. Thanks for the comment.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/7/2016 8:14:00 PM

Brilliant, Howard. Very succinct. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Peace my friend and say hello to Emma:):)

Howard Tunick
Date: 4/10/2016 6:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Daniel. And thanks for thinking of Emma! I spent the day with her today. What a great day. Like I said in the comment above... Life is good and Emma is a very big part of it.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/13/2016 12:08:00 PM

Had to read it multiple times, not for understanding but because of appreciation. I really get it. Great verse. I'll have to memorize this one. Thanks

Howard Tunick
Date: 1/13/2016 8:46:00 PM

Smiling Daniel... Thank you this one was really fun. Glad you enjoyed it.

Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 1:34:00 AM

Howard, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Howard Tunick
Date: 6/12/2015 11:40:00 AM

That is, ...every time I read it.

Howard Tunick
Date: 6/12/2015 11:39:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT. I really enjoyed this one. Not sure why but it just seems fun every time I read. ....and so true....

Daver Austin

Date: 6/9/2015 10:39:00 AM

I like this one. Hope you are the one in back of the mirror. Congrats on the selection. daver

Howard Tunick
Date: 6/9/2015 2:10:00 PM

One of me is..... Thanks Daver.

Abdiel Rios

Date: 6/8/2015 12:59:00 PM

I can relate of what your saying I do create a lot of characters in my head suddenly I create them , but sometimes the characters I make controls my body , and the person isn't me , but I get control on them I can see why you said " which is me is the me"

Howard Tunick
Date: 6/9/2015 2:24:00 PM

All of them are me Abdell. I'm really not sure any of them are in control Though. We seem to be doing alright. At least I'm not fighting with me.

Ivor Davies

Date: 5/23/2015 11:46:00 AM

Howard, excellent context. I am currently altering some of my older poetry to drop the Start of Line capitals and adding correct punctuation to make it more readable. Just a thought:---- I am a creation of myself I don't know who I am.------ I'm this to you and that to him, hardly more than just a scam.------I'd like to be who I'd like to be, if only I could figure-------which of me is the me I see within the mirror.------------ Again agood piece both in rhythm, rhyme and context....Ivor