Who Am I

Is it me, myself, or I 
the one that i despise
to myself i tell many lies
I is always wearing a disguise
Me is the one everyone seems to despise

I search for myself
all i find is a shell
inside it is the pits of hell 
all i ask is will i ever be well
or is this pit to deep in which i fell

The mask i wear
is to make others unaware 
of me being filled with despair
I and me an unfit pair
in hell we all burn because none cared
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ferry Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 11:44 PM
If no one cared....You would have no comments.....rick
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 2:29 PM
True....none care ! A very well written poem, like it - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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