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Who Am I

I'm the light that awakens the soul I'm the warm breeze that soothes you when your cold I'm the hands that make you feel new When your time ends and I'll come for you I'm the one that stops all the pain I'm the one that dries up the rain I'm always here your true helping hands I'm the belief you hold in your heart I'm the blanket that covers you from the dark I'm that hammer of love that chips away at the rocks The rocks that sometimes form from the hatrade in your heart I'm the sun that melts away your sorrows I'm the one that gives you strength so you embrace your tommorow I'm the loud birds that sing to def ears I give you strength when your faced with fears I'm the one that calms down the fierce I seem so far but I'm always near I Am? By Carmen Castro Copyright © 2012

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Date: 7/20/2012 6:17:00 PM
warm glow making us feel whole. I like the genuine simplicity
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Carmen Castro
Date: 7/20/2012 6:24:00 PM
Not one of my favorites..lol
Date: 5/22/2012 3:12:00 PM
Lovely written Carmen, I like this poem alot. Well done! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Carmen Castro
Date: 5/23/2012 10:40:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Anne : )

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