Briana Smith Poet Quintain (English)

Who Am I

WHO AM I ? 
AM I THAT COOL POULAR CHICK EVERYONE WANNA BE
OR THE WEIRD FREAKY FEMALE 
THAT'S TO HERSELF AND SMELLS
LOOK IN THE MIRROR TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE
ASK YOURSELF
AM I UGLY? AM I PRETTY? OR JUST A WANNA BE
DONT HAVE LOW SELF ESTEEM
BE PROUD OF HOW YOU LOOK
IF YOUR BLACK,WHIITE OR DONT HAVE HAIR ON THE SIDES
BE PROUD OF WHO YOU ARE 
ALSO, HOW YOU LOOK INSIDE AND OUT

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Briana Smith February 3, 2010 at 6:14 PM HEY IM BREE THE AURTHOR. THANK YOU ALL FOR THE COMMENTS. HOPE TO GET MORE. ANY REQUEST JUST EMAIL ME OR ON HERE. EMAIL: [email protected] THANKS FOR THE SUPORT AND COMMENTS LOVE YOU ALL

Susan Palli February 2, 2010 at 12:27 PM You tell 'em

Nick Bagnall February 2, 2010 at 5:45 AM An interesting poem full of good sentiment, if only everybody else was as sensible. I enjoyed reading your poetry, but there's no need to shout :)

Carol Sunshine Brown February 2, 2010 at 5:05 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Briana. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

L'Nass Shango February 1, 2010 at 8:11 PM As long as you are a poet its fine with me. Welcome to poetry soup, hope you know you are among friends for you got a friend in me. You are one of us.

Sara Kendrick February 1, 2010 at 3:01 PM Great descriptive write telling us what is on the inside is more important than external appearances. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Susan Mills February 1, 2010 at 2:50 PM Thank you for reminding me to be proud of who I am! You're poem is a self-eteem booster! -Susan Mills