Who Am I

closed door
slamming
resounding 
in my ear.
I hear you call
asking where you are.
Lost
and displaced
case closed
as you
talk
they do not hear 
the words you speak
and you leak
the information you want them to hear
a spear
into your heart.
why wont hey listen, hear your cry
why should i
try
anymore
if they dont listen.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Thank you for sharing this excellent write today Liz. Love, Carol
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October 5, 2009 at 1:51 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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