Who Am I

I have counted all my blessings, even when they’ve made me cry.
I’ve held onto my faith and never questioned why.
I’ve woke up with no lights or dial tone on the phone.
My life has been a struggle, but I’ve never been alone.

I’ve always gone to work and done the best I can.
Sometimes I’ve made bad choices and never had a plan.
I’ve watched my loved ones die, close friends of mine as well.
I’ll always love my God, that’s one thing I’ll never sell.

My path has not been straight, I’ve wondered far and near.
I’ve often put on blinders, so my sight was not that clear.
We all have had our troubles, most far worse than any of mine.
I’ve spent time in the sand, but I’ve never drawn a line.

I guess I’ll make my point, I’ve babbled long enough.
I would never change my past, it’s what has made me tough.
I’m loyal to my friends, for those I love I’d surely die.
This is the honest truth; I’ll never question who am I.

1/8/22
Who Am I Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Unseeking Seeker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Love your line "I would never change my past, it’s what has made me tough." We are today because of the past. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
Koplin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Thanks Paula, have a wonderful day!
Alex Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 10:21 PM
Almost everything of life is included in this philosophical poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Koplin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Thank you so much!
Seeker Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 7:11 PM
It seems you’ve handled the sark and harsh contrasts of life with gusto and verve, Mark. Way to be, way to go! Congrats on your win!
Koplin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Thank you for your generous placement!
Laurie Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Hello Mark ... I certainly enjoyed the flow and rhyme in your poem. The topic was one that most of have traveled with and understand - thank you Mark - Lindsay
Koplin Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Thanks bud!
Cunningham Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:03 AM
You've met lifes challenges head on, sure we make mistakes along the way but we learn from them. Thought provoking piece Mark. Tom
Koplin Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 3:54 PM
I’ve made quite a few.
Logan Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Since we cannot change the past we should use it to reflect on what we hope for the future. You’ve made great points, Mark.
Koplin Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Thanks Jenna!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:18 PM
Hello Mark Koplin, you can only be who you are. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Hello Mark, enjoy your day my friend.
Koplin Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Thanks Darlene! Have a good night.
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