Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Who Am I

innate sense of aliveness
unchanging although we age
what then is screen of awareness
upon which we turn page after page

how may we get to bliss in permanence 
transcending cycles of joy and pain
where is love of lost innocence
cleansing our soul of stain

28-April-2021

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Shirley Hawkins April 28, 2021 at 8:42 PM A very good Poet indeed.... Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM Thanks Shirley! Actually, I had written this as a prompt for a possible future poetry contest, as a line of inquiry ... maybe I’ll still use it for that! Let’s see.

Gershon Wolf April 28, 2021 at 6:02 PM My screen of awareness has just been expanded by your remarkable verse, Seeker. Sweet stuff. :) gw Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 7:39 PM Thanks Gershon! :)

Linda Milgate April 28, 2021 at 5:57 PM nice rhyming of the essence of life Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 7:39 PM An inquiry ... reader must look within

Heidi Sands April 28, 2021 at 10:03 AM Very nice rhyme! Great one :) Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 7:38 PM Thank you, Heidi! :)

L Milton Hankins April 28, 2021 at 9:27 AM Beautifully-written. I love the form. It reminds me of a clay pot in which we can cleanse "our soul of stain." Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 7:38 PM Happy you enjoyed, Milton!

Vijay Pandit April 28, 2021 at 6:00 AM Transcending cycle of joy and pain--that would be the ultimate bliss. Divine sentiments, US! Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 8:03 AM Thanks for dropping by, Vijay! Bliss in permanence, has indeed been attained by many.

Victor Buhagiar April 28, 2021 at 2:54 AM You are you. Lovely poem. Wonder where you get your picture. Unseeking Seeker April 28, 2021 at 2:56 AM Mostly pixabay, sometimes unsplash