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innate sense of aliveness unchanging although we age what then is screen of awareness upon which we turn page after page how may we get to bliss in permanence transcending cycles of joy and pain where is love of lost innocence cleansing our soul of stain 28-April-2021

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Date: 4/28/2021 8:42:00 PM
A very good Poet indeed....
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Date: 4/28/2021 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Shirley! Actually, I had written this as a prompt for a possible future poetry contest, as a line of inquiry ... maybe I’ll still use it for that! Let’s see.
Date: 4/28/2021 6:02:00 PM
My screen of awareness has just been expanded by your remarkable verse, Seeker. Sweet stuff. :) gw
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Date: 4/28/2021 7:39:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! :)
Date: 4/28/2021 5:57:00 PM
nice rhyming of the essence of life
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Date: 4/28/2021 7:39:00 PM
An inquiry ... reader must look within
Date: 4/28/2021 10:03:00 AM
Very nice rhyme! Great one :)
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Date: 4/28/2021 7:38:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi! :)
Date: 4/28/2021 9:27:00 AM
Beautifully-written. I love the form. It reminds me of a clay pot in which we can cleanse "our soul of stain."
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Date: 4/28/2021 7:38:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Milton!
Date: 4/28/2021 6:00:00 AM
Transcending cycle of joy and pain--that would be the ultimate bliss. Divine sentiments, US!
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Date: 4/28/2021 8:03:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Vijay! Bliss in permanence, has indeed been attained by many.
Date: 4/28/2021 2:54:00 AM
You are you. Lovely poem. Wonder where you get your picture.
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:56:00 AM
Mostly pixabay, sometimes unsplash

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