Who Am I

Who am I ?
So happy but shy
Can I not hide my good deeds
And confess the sins I have committed?
For if I do so I will be hated.
Who am I so great?
That cannot follow, the truth's weight,
Who am I so proud and jealous?
Do I know the courteous principle?
Have I served the poor and old?
No moment for them, but rude enough
in this material world.
Why am I so selfish and miser?
Have I fulfilled the needy's desire?
Who am I so short tempered and greedy?
Have I always spoken the truth and
remained in purity?
Whatever sins I have committed O Lord,
Forgive them and help me to remain
Spotless in this material world.
Let me each day do something that will
remove little sadness from the world's vast store.
Lord, I am but a small boat, buffeted by waves
Floating on the ocean of your mighty shore.

                             WRITTEN FOR THE CONTEST: WHO AM I?
                                SPONSORED BY PAULA SWANSON

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/5/2008 3:22:00 PM
Wow....What a deep and meaningful poem..... Amazing......
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Date: 9/24/2008 3:32:00 PM
really enjoyed this fine poem
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Date: 9/23/2008 4:52:00 PM
I love the last line of this write, whatever sins we have all committed, shall be forgiven if we are truly repentant and have corrected the sin, let him without sin cast the first stone, very heartfelt write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/20/2008 6:15:00 AM
repentance is what i hear and salvation is close at hand. this is the heart and not the head. it was my soul that you have feed. John H. Loving III
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Date: 9/19/2008 12:26:00 PM
love the last line floating on the ocean of your mighty shore. this was a great poem and well written. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment
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