Who Am I?

Who am I? Is this really me? No, This isn't me! This isn't me! I look in the mirror, but it isn't me I see Can it possibly be? I never intended all this pain. . . All of this suffering. . . I feel alone, like No one else can save me Friendship never lasts long for me. No one ever stays to help. ~Ed Owens

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Derrick Burton

Date: 8/31/2008 9:58:00 AM

yeah, thats right, poetry is your outlet and by all means I would use it. great poem.

Deneen White

Date: 8/30/2008 7:08:00 PM

hi Ed, real friends do stay and are there to comfort you in your time of need, i will pray that hings get better for you and at least you have your poetry, it can be your catharsis, a healing, take care D-nyce

Ali Matheny

Date: 8/29/2008 12:39:00 PM

Whatcha Doin????????!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ali Matheny

Date: 8/28/2008 2:27:00 PM

I'll help you . Our friendship will last A VERY LONG TIME, if you let it Love You, Alexz Matheny

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/28/2008 6:37:00 AM

Well Ed that sure is an open honest poem of ones self - God Bless

Ali Matheny

Date: 8/28/2008 2:53:00 AM

I'm 15 years old. and you kinda sound like you're hot, r u????