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Who Am I?

Dedicated I stand in this world of many races Delighted I surpass all the wandering gazes Unlimited is my power so innately created Adverse to complaints lie my untouched oasis My dreams scream of love, hope and friendship dedicated Alone I succumb to the wonder nature lovingly decreed Volatile and sensous I implore my status I am a woman of a million different faces

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/31/2008 11:41:00 AM

This reads effortlessy and conveys a clear meaning of self worth and importance, as well as strength and individuality through diversification. Love the flow and the overall feeling I received from reading this, one that makes the heart feel strong. Michael

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/27/2008 3:44:00 AM

Fathima - your poem reads and flows very well - the message is clear and the ending strong inside - Blessings to you

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/27/2008 2:43:00 AM

Wow. You are indeed full of beauty and wonder. You take great pride in who you are and love and appreciate all the gifts in this life. Your dreams are golden, and I am wishing them for you too. A magnificent write! Love, Shar