Fathima Dawood Poet Couplet

Who Am I?

Dedicated I stand in this world of many races
Delighted I surpass all the wandering gazes
Unlimited is my power so innately created
Adverse to complaints lie my untouched oasis
My dreams scream of love, hope and friendship dedicated
Alone I succumb to the wonder nature lovingly decreed
Volatile and sensous I implore my status
I am a woman of a million different faces

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Michael Degenhardt July 31, 2008 at 11:41 AM This reads effortlessy and conveys a clear meaning of self worth and importance, as well as strength and individuality through diversification. Love the flow and the overall feeling I received from reading this, one that makes the heart feel strong. Michael

Michael Jordan July 27, 2008 at 3:44 AM Fathima - your poem reads and flows very well - the message is clear and the ending strong inside - Blessings to you

Sharon Winter July 27, 2008 at 2:43 AM Wow. You are indeed full of beauty and wonder. You take great pride in who you are and love and appreciate all the gifts in this life. Your dreams are golden, and I am wishing them for you too. A magnificent write! Love, Shar