Who Am I

I ponder! Debate, deliberate, contemplate.
Who am I?

From nothingness I’m thrust into this world.
Who am I?

Is this a test? A game? A dream? An illusion? 
Who am I?

No memory of where I came from, no proof of where I’ll go.
Who am I?

So many options. So many theories. They cannot all be right!
Who am I?

I look up to the sky. Is it real? Are we alone?
Who am I? 

My inner self, my conscience. Is that the truth?
Who am I?

Faith, prayer, hope, fear.
Who am I?

Do I have to wait until I die? I need to know.
Who am I?
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Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Hi Ron. I like this. Life is filled with many things. Among those things are questions, and I like the ones of which you speak.
Thompson Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Thanks Curtis. Appreciate the comment my friend. Best wishes...Ron :)
Foss Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 6:00 PM
Hello Ronald, This has the makings of a song. Good work.
Thompson Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Never considered that option but you might have a point. Thank you so much for the comment Dennis. You never know Andrew Lloyd Webber might be a Poetry Soup fan. Best wishes...Ronald
Kgaswane Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Hello Ronald. This is an interesting and creative poem. It reallu stimulated my imagination about Who I am.Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
Thompson Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Thank you. Your comment is very much appreciated.Ron :)
Timperley Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 3:47 PM
You are you and I am me, That's the way it has to be, To question your place in the universe, Could end up being your sleepless curse. Never stop searching for your goal, keep delving down into your soul. Enjoyed peeping at some of your other stuff. God Bless. D.
Thompson Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Much appreciated Dave. Best wishes to you Sir...Ron :)
Kulkarni Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:22 AM
Hi Ronald, I too have that question in my mind always. Then I try my best to turn my attention to the one who is asking the question, is it my mind that produces thoughts according to the information in the memory or is it someone else beyond the mind and body? If I realize that even if for a tiniest moment, I become silent. That silence helps me understand a little bit more..
Thompson Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 3:50 PM
Very interesting concept Smita. I wrote a poem on a similar concept called 'Are we in control?' Love the comment about becoming silent whereby you can ponder - excellent! Thanks for the comment..Ron.
Rebstock Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Well, I had my first cup of tea today reading all your poems featured on poetry soup. Thank you for your humor, creativeness, thoughtfulness. Thoroughly enjoyed them all.
Thompson Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:02 PM
It's a pleasure Shirley. So pleased you enjoyed my poems. Best wishes..Ron xx
Robertson Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 9:54 PM
A spiritual being living in a flesh and blood body. The ultimate test to see if we're worthy to cross over into Infinity.
Thompson Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:23 PM
That is indeed the ultimate test! Appreciate the comment Milton...Ron
Byrne Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 5:14 PM
Hi Ronald, How many people have asked those questions? Well written, Frances
Thompson Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Indeed! Thank you Frances for your positive comment, much appreciated....Ron :)
Hoffman Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 4:20 PM
A thought-provoking poem, Ron, and superbly penned.
Thompson Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Thank you Franci, you complimentary comment means a lot. Best wishes...Ron :)
Strempfl Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 6:27 PM
YES! enjoyed very much and very captivating, relating and well written
Thompson Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Thank you so much Edmund. Much appreciated....best wishes...Ron
Adams Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 12:18 PM
You made me ponder many thoughts that have stirred within my mind in years past...good write, it lingers on in after thoughts !
Thompson Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. Best wishes. Ron
Blown Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 6:44 PM
to hazard a wild guess...you're the one aware that he's observing all of the above and so he 'is' more than all 'that'
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Hello Ronald Thompson, this is a great question. We are whom we are. Yet we are all different. have a nice evening my friend.A great poem. have a nice evening my friend. x Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Your welcome my friend. x Darlene
Thompson Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 5:49 PM
We are indeed all different. Best wishes to you Darlene and thank you kindly for your comment. Ron xx
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 4:02 PM
This is great. Everything poetry should be. Really makes one stop, think, contemplate, ponder the universe and one's place in it. A FAVE for me. Bravo. Best wishes, Gershon
Thompson Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 4:22 PM
The universe and our place in it is a favourite subject of mine. Really pleased you enjoyed ir Gershon. Ron
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