Who

Who
 They’d say “who made you a man, young lad,”
It was my hard old father, bad,
He stood me up, and made me fight,
He taught straight left, knock down right.
And I was undefeated.

To always rise, 
if you’re knocked down.
Attack, attack until you’ve won.
Though I’m still my mother’s son.
His words with me abiding.

To be a man at ten years old,
Work for a living, good as gold,
At droving, I was good I’m told,
horseman,  wild horses, riding.

Don Johnson  11-jul-11

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Guzzi Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:14 PM
smooch thank YOU! Light & Love
Foulk Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 11:32 AM
very creative write, enjoyed the way you put this one together. good luck in the contest.
Warden Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 10:17 PM
I love this."They’d say “who made you a man, young lad,” It was my hard old father, bad,".So good.Good luck in the contest.
Warden Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Thanks for the comments..:)
Onclaud Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 9:50 PM
a tender citation for your father , don.. love the closing lines; superb piece with winning luck! :) huggs, nette
Wesley Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 9:29 PM
A wonderful verse Don. We do have hard lessons to learn and you tell it well.
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