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Who They’d say “who made you a man, young lad,” It was my hard old father, bad, He stood me up, and made me fight, He taught straight left, knock down right. And I was undefeated. To always rise, if you’re knocked down. Attack, attack until you’ve won. Though I’m still my mother’s son. His words with me abiding. To be a man at ten years old, Work for a living, good as gold, At droving, I was good I’m told, horseman, wild horses, riding. Don Johnson 11-jul-11 "The Right Tme" contest Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico

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Date: 7/11/2011 9:14:00 PM
smooch thank YOU! Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:32:00 AM
very creative write, enjoyed the way you put this one together. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:17:00 PM
I love this."They’d say “who made you a man, young lad,” It was my hard old father, bad,".So good.Good luck in the contest.
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Juanita Warden
Date: 7/11/2011 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for the comments..:)
Date: 7/10/2011 9:50:00 PM
a tender citation for your father , don.. love the closing lines; superb piece with winning luck! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/10/2011 9:29:00 PM
A wonderful verse Don. We do have hard lessons to learn and you tell it well.
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