Who

who said you could come in
i heard you knocking outside
but all i need is a friend

not a love that will change my life
not a whore to make me feel good for the night
just a friend that can make it all right

you made me feel like i was wanted again
but your feelings were only lies
somehow somewhere along the way
i lost all faith inside

was it you that showed me wrong from right
was it you that said come take my hand
you only took me a little while
then left what was left of me in the sand

i loved you
you loved him
i loved you
you lied

i love you
you love me
but that is just a lie
ill love you forever
left with only a sigh, left without goodbye

who can save me form my curse
who can set me free
you are the one that put me here
for all of eternity

i lay myself to rest for the last time
and for the first time i see you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 2, 2011 at 5:39 PM
WELCOME here in the poetry soup..the group of poets all over the world!!!! keep on writing... want to read more from you.... ***jun-jun
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