Who?

The beauty within,
Those tears that drained,
You see an image,
That is impossible to see,
To forgive those,
Who thought who knew,
The path of life to walk,
To follow those who knew,
Who see things as a blind,
Who talk without thinking,
Who feel without focus,
That say without knowing,
Who lie in your face,
Not knowing that you know,
The truth comes,
To those who are searching,
Seeking for a massage that's hidden,
In front of you that could be easily mistaken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/1/2010 11:24:00 PM
It sure can be hidden too when right in front of you!! Nice seeing this today and thanks for your comment to Free. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:27:00 AM
Nice one beginning to end, enjoyed P.D.
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful words to your poetry today ..to answer your question about The Green Mile.. it was the title of a great movie about prison life and I saw the caterpillar as being in a prison of his own form until the transformation into the butterfly... as the prisoners after serving their time for crime.. and there was so much color of green in the photo too... thankxxx and appreciate your wonderful comments..luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:02:00 AM
So much truth in your prose poem, Shirin! A powerful piece you wrote!...And thank you for your comment on "Unfinished Dreams"....Wishing you a nice weekend...Gert
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