Who?

who will love you when I'm gone
who will look into your face
and see if you are there?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryusaka Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:57 PM
This is so simple... and yet inexplicably beautiful. Every line is executed flawlessly -and the poem simply breathes with a sort of melancholy expectation. I love it.
Kurth Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 3:07 PM
great question and poem, Veronica. Check out my Owl and the Meditator for another take on Who? Krista
Joseph Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 2:32 PM
I am honored.
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 1:48 PM
Concern for many people in this world but for different reasons. Keep writing. Sara
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