Russell Sivey Poet Verse

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Whitney 2--Pure Gold

In a field
Lies all our hopes
Ancient case
Filled with pure gold
Opens hard
With old latches
The dreams of a lifetime sits


Whitney 2 Contest
Written September 5th, 2017
Verse
3/4/3/4/3/4/7 syllable count

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James Inman September 27, 2017 at 9:10 AM Reminds me of when I was young and walked into an old abandoned house and found hundreds of letter strewn all over the floor. Memories, lost forever. Nice write.

Eve Roper September 11, 2017 at 10:48 PM Back to Congratulate you, Russell Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior September 11, 2017 at 6:22 PM Back to Congrats!!! Mr. Russell...good one my friend...god bless and stay well...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2017 at 5:39 PM very nicely done, Russell. Congrats.

Heidi Sands September 11, 2017 at 2:29 PM Congratulations Russell :)

Vijay Pandit September 11, 2017 at 12:50 PM Congrats Russell!

Jack Webster September 11, 2017 at 12:26 PM congratulations!

Nette Onclaud September 11, 2017 at 11:40 AM to borrow your words, russell, " phenomenal!" ... i enjoyed this interpretative work which merited a smashing win in the contest... thanks for your participation... huggs

Connie Marcum Wong September 6, 2017 at 2:56 PM Oh, I really like your entry Russell. Dreams of a lifetime....Lovely! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2017 at 2:32 AM - Beautiful, Russell - Luck in the contest - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper September 5, 2017 at 11:12 PM I love the theme and imagery in this poem, Russell, a winner already Hugs Eve ~`*.

Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 9:12 PM Lovely interpretation Russell..good luck!

Kim Rodrigues September 5, 2017 at 9:06 PM A nice image, Russell!

Winged Warrior September 5, 2017 at 7:04 PM Tell him Emma...a beautiful rendition...my Mothers name is Emma...she is very ill at the moment...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey September 5, 2017 at 6:58 PM Russell couldn't resist doing one of Nette's contests. He loves a good challenge. I decided to post this for him as he used up all his time earlier today. This is one of my favorites of his. Emma :) Heidi Sands September 5, 2017 at 7:16 PM Thanks for posting this for him Emma. Please let him know this is an Excellent poem. A favorite and good luck in the contest ! :)