Whitney 2--Conquest

Backpacking
I search my truth
place unknown—
With abandon 
limbs roam  free
on brown pampas,
thirsting for newfound conquests.


Contest: Whitney 2
5 Sept 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Carly, a lovely sentiment in your work, Enjoy the journey and the destination will take care of itself.
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September 11, 2017 at 10:43 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carly hugs Eve
Warrior Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Congrats!!! Carly on your beautiful Win!!!...god bless...^WW^
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:08 PM
Congrats on this fine piece, Carly!
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Great poem, Carly. Congrats on the win
Sands Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations Carly :)
Webster Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations! makes me want to see the rest of the journey!
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September 11, 2017 at 10:47 AM
now this whitney is incredible: tying in a 'search', 'backpacking',' abandon', 'pampas', 'conquests' created a visual, emotional image in a solid manner... congrats on your win, and thanks for joining.. huggs
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