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Whitney 2- Walkaway

half a heart,
my belongings
in this cracked
old leather case.
through greener
path on earth I
wonder this to disappear.


9/5/2017



seven lines with a syllable pattern  3/4/3/4/3/4/7

absenceverse

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James Inman

September 27, 2017 at 9:28 AM

You never know what's next Eve. A lovely write.

Paul Callus

September 16, 2017 at 9:23 AM

I like your take on this suitcase theme, Eve. We never know what life has in store for us. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Subimal Sinha-Roy

September 12, 2017 at 1:44 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Eve.

Winged Warrior

September 11, 2017 at 6:28 PM

Congrats!!! on your wonderful poem and Win Eve...great write...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

September 11, 2017 at 5:47 PM

I love that metaphor of half a heart you used, Eve. Congrats for your win.

Vijay Pandit

September 11, 2017 at 12:52 PM

Congrats Eve!

Jack Webster

September 11, 2017 at 12:46 PM

Congrstulations Eve!

Nette Onclaud

September 11, 2017 at 12:16 PM

beautiful reflections which put this work on the winning list, eve... big congrats and thanks for supporting this contest..huggs

Heidi Sands

September 11, 2017 at 10:27 AM

Congratulations Eve :)

Akkina Downing

September 6, 2017 at 6:42 PM

A great piece Eve, and good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2017 at 5:38 PM

I like how you associated the theme with greener paths that we can have on our minds. Nicely done, Eve.

Alexis Y.

September 6, 2017 at 9:51 AM

Hi Eve, What a good take on the contest theme. The scene you created with a few words stands out. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats

September 6, 2017 at 8:22 AM

Wowsa! Don't know what a whitney2 is, but I like this succinct statement! Hugs 'n howdies ~ john

Probir Gupta

September 6, 2017 at 7:13 AM

Nice take on the contest ... Enjoyed it ...

Russell Sivey

September 6, 2017 at 5:31 AM

This is remarkable! I really enjoyed reading your tremendous poem this morning! You have written an amazing write for this contest! I believe Nette will love it! There are a lot of these poem out there, it will be fun to see who wins...I believe your will be up there, if not victorious! Great work my friend!!