Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Whitney 2- Stolen

Motionless
In greenish field,
Unmoved by
The blowing wind,
The suitcase
Has baby food
Stolen by the fleeing thieves.

September 5, 2017
Whitney 2 contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Syllables: 3,4,3,4,3,4,7
Checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Sara Kendrick January 26, 2023 at 2:14 AM This one has started me to thinking. I wonder if that baby went hungry since they had stolen the food but did not get away with it. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2019 at 8:28 PM Came back here and I remember the contest this one was in!! It's fun to see it again two years later.

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2017 at 5:41 PM I really like the little story you told with your entry, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 6, 2017 at 5:56 PM Thank you Andrea!

Akkina Downing September 5, 2017 at 6:19 PM Excellent work Vijay and good luck :) Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 7:47 PM Thank you Akkina!

Joseph May September 5, 2017 at 5:48 PM Nicely done Vijay...best wishes Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 6:00 PM Thanks Joseph!

Kim Rodrigues September 5, 2017 at 10:30 AM Wow! Good one! GL In contest, Vijay! Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 10:49 AM Thank you Kim!

Winged Warrior September 5, 2017 at 8:06 AM Very nicely done my friend...so far so good...best of luck Vijay...god bless...^WW^ Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 8:18 AM Thanks for your wonderful feedback WW!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2017 at 7:16 AM - Excellent poem, Vijay - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 8:18 AM Thank you for your lovely feedback--always delighted by your visit Anne-Lise!

Olusegun Arowolo September 5, 2017 at 6:39 AM This is wonderful. Great write pal.good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 8:14 AM Thank you for lovely comments!

Russell Sivey September 5, 2017 at 6:12 AM This is fabulous my friend, such an amazing message written within this incredible write! You have delighted me by your grandiose skill at writing this difficult form, but you have written a fantastic piece! Great Work!! Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 6:30 AM Thank you Russell for your lovely feedback--love your comments as always!

Afolabi Muideen September 5, 2017 at 6:06 AM wow! what a brilliant poem. Is the flowing air the thief or birds? Thanks for sharing. Vijay Pandit September 5, 2017 at 6:29 AM Thank you Afolabi for your feedback! I am afraid the thief is long gone.