David Mohn Poet Verse

Whitney 2 - Faux Distance

I wander
        In barbed circles
          Seeking grace
         In faux distance-
           Looking back
          In wry dismay… 
My baggage has followed me

WHITNEY 2 - Poetry Contest
        ~05 Sep 2017~

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Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2017 at 5:34 PM I see no congrats. I had really loved your entry!!

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2017 at 6:13 PM OH boy, now I have seen THREE that I think are superb. I know I will not be in top three. (I will be happy just to be on the list)

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2017 at 6:12 PM Hey, I love how you thought of crop circles to guess my mystery. I was thinking of something even more sinister. Let me read your interpretation now.