Whitney 2 Abandoned

Suitcase still
Life abandoned
Grass grows hope
It enters soil
Makes more grass
If you return
Discard will greet you in green.

September 5, 2017.
Whitney 2 Poetry Contest.
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Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 6:03 PM
I really loved that part: Grass grows hope. Nicely done.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 11:28 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for appreciating.
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Nicely penned Subimal...best of luck...god bless...^WW^
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:18 AM
Thank you, WW.
Sands Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Good one Subimal. Good luck in the contest :)
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