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Whitewater

Mountain springs forth life Cascading, white, powerful A natural flow

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Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/3/2009 2:44:00 AM

YEah, this is what I get to see everyday of my life here, so beautiful, and pure, love this Michael, love, Kristin P.S-awesome idea for a contest. :)

Date: 2/2/2009 12:06:00 PM

Nice use of imagery to paint a picture with words. You've captured the essence of "Whitewater" in this poem. Good use of just three lines. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Have a nice day! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 2/2/2009 7:56:00 AM

Someting to look forward to Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Glad you enjoyed the new kyrielle form

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/2/2009 6:30:00 AM

I can see the snow melting ....into cascades of white water. Well done~ Carrie