Whitewater

Mountain springs forth life
Cascading, white, powerful
A natural flow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Reynolds Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 2:44 AM
YEah, this is what I get to see everyday of my life here, so beautiful, and pure, love this Michael, love, Kristin P.S-awesome idea for a contest. :)
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February 2, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Nice use of imagery to paint a picture with words. You've captured the essence of "Whitewater" in this poem. Good use of just three lines. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Have a nice day! Karen
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February 2, 2009 at 7:56 AM
Someting to look forward to Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Glad you enjoyed the new kyrielle form
Richards Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 6:30 AM
I can see the snow melting ....into cascades of white water. Well done~ Carrie
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