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Whiteness Contest

Sea caps, white, shadows Fin, cutting above surface White caps part, Great White
Herons calling out Congregating over cove A gaggle of clouds
Eagle soars above Snowshoe hare, new tracks, no hare Disguise of whiteness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/22/2012 12:42:00 PM
Just learning about haiku Rollo i see i still have a lot to learn xx
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Rollo West
Date: 11/22/2012 1:41:00 PM
Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by, and good luck with your quest to learn Haiku. Rollo
Date: 11/22/2012 10:54:00 AM
(here I am again ....) This is a really awesome haiku Rollo. - Enjoyed this a lot. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/22/2012 1:40:00 PM
Hi Anne, thank you for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo
Date: 11/22/2012 5:19:00 AM
Great Haiku work..Enjoyed reading each one..I like the line "A gaggle of clouds"...Is not a group of geese called a gaggle?...I know that it is one species that that is the term for them..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Rollo West
Date: 11/22/2012 1:39:00 PM
Hi Sara, thank you for stopping by. The word gaggle is most often used with geese, yes, but it means "to gather", so can be applied to various things. Rollo
Date: 11/22/2012 4:58:00 AM
This is an awesome haiku my friend. I enjoyed reading it! Good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for stopping by in my blog. love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/22/2012 1:37:00 PM
Hi lwonora, thank you so much for your comment my friend. Rollo