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Whiteness Contest

Sea caps, white, shadows Fin, cutting above surface White caps part, Great White Herons calling out Congregating over cove A gaggle of clouds Eagle soars above Snowshoe hare, new tracks, no hare Disguise of whiteness

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/22/2012 12:42:00 PM

Just learning about haiku Rollo i see i still have a lot to learn xx

Rollo West
Date: 11/22/2012 1:41:00 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by, and good luck with your quest to learn Haiku. Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2012 10:54:00 AM

(here I am again ....) This is a really awesome haiku Rollo. - Enjoyed this a lot. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West
Date: 11/22/2012 1:40:00 PM

Hi Anne, thank you for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2012 5:19:00 AM

Great Haiku work..Enjoyed reading each one..I like the line "A gaggle of clouds"...Is not a group of geese called a gaggle?...I know that it is one species that that is the term for them..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Rollo West
Date: 11/22/2012 1:39:00 PM

Hi Sara, thank you for stopping by. The word gaggle is most often used with geese, yes, but it means "to gather", so can be applied to various things. Rollo

Len Gasun

Date: 11/22/2012 4:58:00 AM

This is an awesome haiku my friend. I enjoyed reading it! Good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for stopping by in my blog. love/hugs, Leonora

Rollo West
Date: 11/22/2012 1:37:00 PM

Hi lwonora, thank you so much for your comment my friend. Rollo