Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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Whiteness

An indispensable beauty in the eyes of our Beholder
In the heart of one's innocence radiates its power
It stands  to what is right and represents holiness
In this colorful world, the only thing which balances

It’s the most essential  tool  in the world of a writer
To be filled up with  his ideas and moods that conquer
Resembled  to a tabula rasa, describing a child’s mind
Where ceaseless quest of knowledge is forever designed






 






Written: Oct.  16,2012

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Skat A February 22, 2013 at 6:10 PM Hi sweetie, thank you for the hi's on my account. You are so sweet~SKAT

Joseph May October 30, 2012 at 9:32 AM well penned Leonora...winning wishes....thanks for stopping by

Michael J. Falotico October 23, 2012 at 4:24 PM Excellent , wonderful. Very Good!!! Hugs Michael

James Tate October 23, 2012 at 2:37 PM Leonora, you introduced us to a new word, tabolaraza, wow! Clever. Good job.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 23, 2012 at 1:59 PM AN INTRICATE DESIGN O BEAUTY AND INSPIRATION LEONOEA AND A WORTHY CONTENDER FOR WHITENESS AS IT ILLUMINATES EVERY LINE LUV .. BEST WISHES TO U ..

Poet Destroyer A October 23, 2012 at 11:21 AM Hi Leo, sisie-pooh.... how are you??? did you get my new soup-mail... just send it to you after getting out of work.... i'm still shock over my blog... xox...pd

Bukang Liwayway October 23, 2012 at 10:48 AM super awesome poem friend Norie..wow thanks for the new word..ok I will try to use it someday hahahahha..Have a nice day always!! hugs! :)

Harry Horsman October 22, 2012 at 2:02 PM love this, you really drive this poem home to me, awesome.....

Jack Ellison October 22, 2012 at 5:11 AM White is a most beautiful 'colour'... hugs, Jack xox

Elizabeth Wesley October 21, 2012 at 9:02 PM Your whiteness radiates the purity of what our inner selves might achieve. Maybe being a writer gives usinsight into that state. Lovely verse to think upon.

Debbie Guzzi October 21, 2012 at 6:54 PM very very very good...!!! light & love

Nette Onclaud October 21, 2012 at 6:47 PM just passing by to say hello, nora.. you back?.. :) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A October 21, 2012 at 12:09 PM Hi , Leo, are we suppose to use the word whiteness in the title. My newest poem is for the same contest... Sisie-pooh... I like the holiness feel in your poem..i wish that is all we lived for. however i like the way you describe the innocence of a child's mind with the purity of whiteness... enjoyed your poem...always~ your bff ans sis....pd

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2012 at 11:20 AM white as next to godliness. So beautiful, Leonora, and I love how you used that word new to me: tabolaraza!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2012 at 10:46 AM Leonora, soooo gorgeous poem - it makes the afternoon more beautiful than it is - The sun goes down here and have colored the sky pink. Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)