Whitelover

When you came into my life, you gave it all to me
You promised love and said it all could be
You stood on the edge, girl you say, you can come or you can stay
But if you let me go my dear, this will never be as clear
Your body was like no other
So pure, So White, So very delicate at night
Your burn was deep and sharp
I felt the pain and knew just then, I would die for you again and again
My soul I threw away to you
My stranger inside me grew stronger
I felt my knees buckle under
You said your recipe is real and undeniable
Try me once baby, its like your on fire
We lived the life
I chose the night
Just you and me running through it all
We slid, We cried, We walked, We lied
We gave it all away to them
No more pretties to call our own
Oh lover, my whitelover where are you now
Did you crawl deep into another
Or have you to fallen for the lover
I tried that once to bring you back
Addiction threw your body down in lust 
All you have to say is, Im sorry little blue eyes but do I know you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/15/2010 4:35:00 AM
i enjoyed ur poem today, keep it going, love louzana
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:57:00 PM
enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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