White Stallion

Hearing his hoof's beat,
Against the lustrous green grass;
Gleaming white as snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 8:29 PM
a richly layered haiku! Justin, Jim
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Cantu Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 8:24 PM
Winter wilds, oh yeah!!! The image rocks, just like a power metal band album cover :D:D:D: thanks for the experience yeah!!!
Strand Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 1:04 AM
Like the aliteration Justin in L1..Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments.
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May 23, 2009 at 4:26 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. The title works well with the last line. Keep on writing! Karen
Reynolds Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 2:31 AM
What a scene, I love snow and horses, beautiful - i can hear them now...! Love, Kristin
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 9:20 PM
Marvelous image of my favorite animal. The stallion rides to glory in your write! Love, Carolyn
Moreno Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 7:05 PM
Great use of imagery, love the title and the opening line...Raul
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