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White Stallion

Hearing his hoof's beat,
Against the lustrous green grass;
Gleaming white as snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2009 8:29:00 PM
a richly layered haiku! Justin, Jim
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:47:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:24:00 PM
Winter wilds, oh yeah!!! The image rocks, just like a power metal band album cover :D:D:D: thanks for the experience yeah!!!
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Date: 5/24/2009 1:04:00 AM
Like the aliteration Justin in L1..Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments.
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:26:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. The title works well with the last line. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/21/2009 2:31:00 AM
What a scene, I love snow and horses, beautiful - i can hear them now...! Love, Kristin
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Date: 5/20/2009 9:20:00 PM
Marvelous image of my favorite animal. The stallion rides to glory in your write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:05:00 PM
Great use of imagery, love the title and the opening line...Raul
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