White Silence

Winter coats proliferate, the earth is stilled by snowflakes slowly drifting, swirling, shifting, sifting down, a whirling, curling cloud of white confetti.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 6:23 AM
Deliriously beautiful, Keith ... a fantastic assemblage of imagery that paints the mind ... more power to a brother.
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April 27, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative poem. Well done! Karen
Ginn Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 12:52 PM
White confetti! How original and fun. Great imagination Mr. B
Austin Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Beautiful winter verse, but am so glad it's over. Love, daver
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:34 AM
This description makes me think of a snowglobe..turned upside down...so lovely! :)
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