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White Silence

Winter coats proliferate, the earth is stilled by snowflakes slowly drifting, swirling, shifting, sifting down, a whirling, curling cloud of white confetti.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/7/2009 6:23:00 AM
Deliriously beautiful, Keith ... a fantastic assemblage of imagery that paints the mind ... more power to a brother.
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:48:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative poem. Well done! Karen
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:52:00 PM
White confetti! How original and fun. Great imagination Mr. B
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Date: 4/26/2009 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful winter verse, but am so glad it's over. Love, daver
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:34:00 AM
This description makes me think of a snowglobe..turned upside down...so lovely! :)
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