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White Rabbit

Spying dilatory lagomorph hole in one, curious Alice tumbles while following

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/31/2015 3:50:00 PM

A brilliant CINQUAIN Nigel... I love 'dilatory lagomorph.' as your second 7-syllable line, and curious Alice tumbling. SUPERB my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/31/2015 5:24:00 PM

...and the same to you my friend! All the best, Keith

Nigel Fawcett
Date: 12/31/2015 5:06:00 PM

Thank you, Keith, for your kind words. I wrote a short article on the modern cinquain http://www.lunigianawending.com/14532/poetry-why-i-have-grown-to-like-the-cinquain-so-much/ and why I admire it :) Wishing you a very Happy New Year full of health, happiness and prosperity. Nigel