White Rabbit

Spying
dilatory lagomorph
hole in one,
curious Alice tumbles while
following
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:50 PM
A brilliant CINQUAIN Nigel... I love 'dilatory lagomorph.' as your second 7-syllable line, and curious Alice tumbling. SUPERB my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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December 31, 2015 at 5:24 PM
...and the same to you my friend! All the best, Keith
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December 31, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Keith, for your kind words. I wrote a short article on the modern cinquain http://www.lunigianawending.com/14532/poetry-why-i-have-grown-to-like-the-cinquain-so-much/ and why I admire it :) Wishing you a very Happy New Year full of health, happiness and prosperity. Nigel
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