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White Pines

Sunrise  ~ let the games commence.
White pines sway in the spring breeze.
Chipmunks playful at their feet.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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May 30, 2018 at 9:56 PM

Haunting image in the last line. Decay and decline are so sad... :) Gershon

May 30, 2018 at 10:08 PM

Those scary chipmunks, eh Gershon? LOL

Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2018 at 3:24 PM

GREAT image! Love those chipmunks.

May 30, 2018 at 5:38 PM

LOL Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 30, 2018 at 9:48 AM

I can see it, hear it... lovely haiku! xomo :)

May 30, 2018 at 11:06 AM

Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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