White Pines

white pines swaying in the spring breeze chipmunks at their feet posted on May 30, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/30/2018 9:56:00 PM

Haunting image in the last line. Decay and decline are so sad... :) Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2018 10:08:00 PM

Those scary chipmunks, eh Gershon? LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2018 3:24:00 PM

GREAT image! Love those chipmunks.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2018 5:38:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/30/2018 9:48:00 AM

I can see it, hear it... lovely haiku! xomo :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/30/2018 11:06:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment.