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White Noise

He’s ambling toward me and his lips move I pick up my pace, the distance to remove Moving ever closer, still can’t hear his voice So much seems distorted in a world of white noise Bikers trek loudly o’er the pebble-filled road And the sounds of nature are on overload Energetic squirrels rustle through tree limbs Mother duck spreads wings, splashes as she swims Even the watch on my wrist ticks faintly Its old smiling face staring back so quaintly Now he is no more than ten feet away But the words he utters -- still awash in gray His message eludes me, though I long to hear Why is it his words do not reach my ears Face to face, but the barrier still solid My pulse quickens and my skin turns pallid Could it be I hear only what cannot hurt Above words of rejection, painful and curt As he moves away, I sense the farewell But still the mere notion I try to dispel Absorbing instead the more welcome white noise That penetrates my brain by my own choice *For Constance's Contest: "Hearing" "...for a man hears what he wants to hear and disregards the rest." From "The Boxer" by Simon and Garfunkel.

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Date: 5/3/2010 1:42:00 PM
My congratulations on your win in the contest, Carolyn! Enjoy!!
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in this unusual contest. well done Carolyn...cheers Margaret
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend,, a beautiful set of couplets that express so very much in sensitive words as well very very descriptive,,,And again as always Thank you so very much for all the kind words that you leave behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:54:00 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your winning poem in Constance's contest ... a perfect piece expressing your assignment ... enjoy another special moment of winning.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:33:00 PM
great poem :)
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:38:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Carolyn, my dear friend. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:29:00 AM
A wonderful poem Carolyn and a truth for us all... about hearing what we want to hear. I think a lot about that date and others also. I'd love to chat sometime and share. :)) Hope all is going well for you my dear friend. As always, I enjoy reading your brilliant works.
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:07:00 PM
The reality can hurt so much. your title is perfect for your poem. i can almost feel the emotions within it, yes it really is deep if you go that far with it.sometimes, even if the truth is good to know, but they must deny it in their mind they honestly don't know. great description, and wonderful poem. good luck, it would be my win.. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:02:00 PM
Excellent poetry, Carolyn. Good luck in the contest. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:09:00 AM
hi carolyn thank you for your support I had to give her a piece of my mind first now I can block her my poem was never meant towards her she took it upon herself now i am done faleshia
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:38:00 AM
Carolyne another superb write, have a great Easter chin up lady Daniel
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:36:00 PM
Wish you all the best
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:28:00 PM
I think you will do well in the contest.........smile!
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:36:00 PM
Wow...Carolyn...it's so funny how our own minds try to convince us that we've done something wrong...and it seems to always happen on some unfortunate day ! Love this write Carolyn ! I had to read this many times to decipher it , probably in mine own light. james
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:08:00 PM
ok...ok... I got that off my chest in mail!...on to this beauty!.....yes, incredible emotion here! such intense, deep feelings presented so perfectly! very original work! Carolyn! a winner! jimbo
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:00:00 PM
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Date: 3/31/2010 4:58:00 PM
Yes I agree with Linda-Marie, it's a terrific write! Sometimes it is too hard for men to listen! I only have problems when talking on the phone to understand every word being said. all the best and fingers crossed for your entry in the contest...Keep writing Carolyn!...Love, Gert
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Date: 3/31/2010 4:05:00 PM
Another terrific write Carolyn and good luck in Constance's contest.. my topic was JOY and Jubilant is my entry.. another trip to the winners circle for sure so get ready to receive kudos for this one..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/31/2010 3:16:00 PM
Yes! An exercise in oblivion - the black and white hole. Sometimes, facing reality brings on a forced detachment, and that detachment is, I believe, necessary. I like this poem mucho, Carolyn. Love, daver
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:36:00 PM
Good afternoon Carolyn, I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:26:00 PM
Great entry, Carolyne. I wonder if I am ever gonna find the time for MY assignment. I wish so bad I had been given YOURS becuase I have the perfect poem for "hearing" haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:22:00 PM
You are so gifted, and it seems to come so easily .... another wonderful entry to the contest from you! Talented as you are! Great work, Carolyn! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/31/2010 1:41:00 PM
Goodluck in the contest,so so talented dear,a pleasure to read-Charma.HOW RU?
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:56:00 AM
brilliant-choice hearing in its true form
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:35:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this write that tells a good truth..Sara
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